Narrative Writing

i am learning to write a narrative story.
I'll know I can do this when my stories have:

- Character - Setting - Introduction - Problem - Climax - Conclusion - Descriptive language such as smilies and metaphors - Character speech using speech marks

This is my narrative

This is my narrative i have been writing. It is about Hermes a Greek God 

Something i found hard was putting the sentences together.

Something I learned was the expert word for hero is protagonist.